Several languages die each year. Many people feel this is a positive trend and that a world with fewer languages promotes harmony and understanding between people. Analyze both sides of this argument and provide your opinion.
No one can deny the fact that there are numerous language in this universe for communication. Languages is a fundamental factor for any nation to their identity. However, many of them are extincting each year. In the given scenario, some people perceive this as their good fortune as it makes people easy to communicate with all however some other opine that this should not happen. Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that undoubetedly, if only fewer language exixt then there is no worry for us to learn different language for communication. Having said that, this does not mean language extinction aids in promoting harmony throughout the world. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the subsequent paragraph.
To commence with, in the world of mordern age people have to maintain connection with personnel globally. During this course, the only hurdle people face is language barrier. To be more precise, if there are merely a small number of languages all around then it would be great for working person as they can easily share their ideas and concept to a persona from foreign nation. To cite an example, if a person from Japan have to coodinate with the person from Africa and let us assume there do not aware about each other language then what would happen? Indeed, they cannot work together for real. There, it surely benefits people if there is fewer language in exist.
The above stated statements sounds reasonable however the identity of nation that language delineates should not be overlooked. Eventhough, language extinction provide a great advantage to working personnel, one should not forget that it is the language that makes us unique and gives our identity even in foreign land. Drawing from my own experience, last year I visited Singapore and when I had conversation with my husband in our own language people around us used to get curious about what were we talking about and where wre we from? This was the moment we felt so proud that we got a chance to represent our home land.Therefore, this clearly shows that how crucial the language is.
All things considered, language is something that should be reamain still and pass from generation to generation. Despite the fact that having fewer language might be beneficial in some ways, it is not always welcoming.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...got a chance to represent our home land.Therefore, this clearly shows that how crucial th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, still, then, therefore, while, i feel, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92583120205 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62445218954 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544757033248 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0469104407 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.368421053 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5789473684 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94736842105 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331438924518 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108273702383 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570197365751 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194933413873 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869427878139 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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