Some items (such as clothes or furniture) can be made by hand or by machine. Which do you prefer - items made by hand or items made by machine? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice.
The advent of technology had major impacts on various manufacturing zones. Ever since there has been a competition between hand made or machine made businesses. This essay will explore the merits of machine-made furniture and explain the three benefits of economics, accuracy and being high-tech.
There is a common ground that producing furniture is an industrious and meticulous process in which the manufacturer spends an enormous amount of time. The sum of the amount of time and effort put on the design and fabrication process is tantamount to the cost of the final product. However, the manufacturers in the digital process use machines such as CNC and KUKA which had a major impact on the furniture industry. They work as sufficient as possible and spend less time, as against humans which leads to the less overall cost of the machine-made furniture in contrast to hand made ones. Moreover, fastidiousness and accuracy in the fabrication process lead to a drop in materials which is one of the major merits of technology.
Also, using technology leads to accuracy in every scale of the project. Each piece of furniture has different measures and details. In parallel, computers and robots which have exactness will be one of the great benefits in the manufacturing process. For instance, we had to design and fabricate a lamp for one of our university projects. We had to model the 3D lamp in the computer with exact measures and angles and then use a 3D printer to fabricate it. The conversion between the 3D modeling software and printer was an essential and demanding part of the project that needed a meticulous mind to match perfectly. Therefore, there was no room for any kind of error or mistake and at last the product looked perfect and without any flaws.
Last but not least, high-tech products have various interesting options which are developing every day in the world of technology. For instance, using machine-learning features in the design process make the products advantageous in many ways. As an example, lately some designers in their research project have created a chair based on the physics of the people who sit on it and the form of the product is changing constantly. Consequently, they made a huge step in the world of technology and industrial design. Moreover, high-tech projects need to meet high standards and guidelines which make them even better products.
To sum up, technology has major impacts on the cost, the preciseness and creative use of technology of the product. Therefore, the machine-made furniture and product is a suitable option for many people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Line 9, column 117, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ative use of technology of the product. Therefore the machine-made furniture and product ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, for instance, in contrast, kind of, such as, in contrast to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 43.0788530466 26% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2056.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02689486553 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84908121431 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511002444988 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4114040317 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.8 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.45 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184297520075 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600979941974 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074611106974 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121277841847 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781238716212 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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