Independence is very subjective. Every person has their own definition of independence and freedom. In my opinion, young adults should live independently from their parents. I feel this way for three reasons which i will be exploring in the following essay.
Firstly, Living away from parents forces the adults to do all their work on their own. Take their own decisions and most importantly learn how to face life. Young adult are at a stage where it is very important to know the world and the people. How to deal with life and the things it throw towards us. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Once my kitchen had a gas leak and I started to panic. But, soon I opened the windows and handled the situation very well. Also, i used to do a part-time job at a book store which made me financially independent and taught me how to handle my finances. So, here sometimes it is very important to learn how to do things without the help from our parents. Thus, living away from parents makes an adult independent.
Secondly, It allows the adult to grow and have new experiences. When we live with parents there are certain rules and regulations that every house must follow. But, in this changing world it is very important for a person to get out of their comfort zone and try new thing for their overall development and to increase their knowledge. For example, my friend's parents didn't allow him to go to school picnics for years and he didn't have any experience of staying away from his parents. So, when in college we went to an industrial visit he had no idea what to pack and precautions that are required to be taken. Moreover, he was constantly homesick due to which he was not enjoying or learning new thing taught to us at the industry. So, such situations hinder the growth of a person. Thus, for gaining new experiences and for personal growth living away from parents is important.
Thirdly, living independently also reduces the burden of the parents and allows them to live for themselves. After a child in born most of the parent's world revolve around them, to satisfy their child's demands and needs. For instance, In India there are many women who quit their jobs to take care for their child. The father works more hard to pay the school and college fees. So, if an adult lives on it's own and earn money, he can help his parents.
In conclusion, I think young adults should start living on their own. This is because they can be independent financially and do their work on their own, Have new experiences and grow and, reduce the burden of their parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2137.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 464.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60560344828 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50857532694 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497844827586 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 646.2 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9699104458 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6896551724 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.62068965517 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326572516306 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914994216487 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082301636818 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214379755291 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492059841416 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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