Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.” Use reasons and details to support your opinion.
The debate regarding the benefits of the internet has been going for a long time now. Many people think that internet has negative impact on individuals. However, I feel that internet is beneficial and has positive effect on the people's life. I think this way for three reasons which we will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, Internet has become a source of income for many individuals. Internet has given a platform to many individual to start their own company, blogs which will help them become independent at a very young age and instill the quality of responsibility which is very important in a person's life. My own life experience is a compelling example of this. I am very fond of creative stuff, so i started a page on instagram where i used make various handmade gifts and sell them. I did publicity of my page on various platform available on the internet which helped my sales. This actually helped me financially alot while still pursuing my career. Thus, Internet has a positive effect on many individuals life as it gives various platform that can help people be financially stable while doing the things that they love.
Secondly, Internet has helped in social awareness alot. It helps people to stay connected, seek help and even keep people aware of the things that are happening around the world. For example, the act that happened in kerala where a elephant and her baby was murdered made people aware of the things happening around them and fight for the right thing. Internet helps people to gain knowledge about various matters happening around them and raise their voice against injustice which is a important factor that a person must have. Thus, internet has helped people be aware of things and positively impact's their life.
Thirdly, Internet has made life of people way easy than it was before. For instance, I used to go to shopping alot and become back without anything as i didn't like it. As a result, i used to waste alot of time making many trip to the mall. But, now there are various sites and apps that allows me to buy things online with a wide variety of options to choose from. I have started to save alot of time my doing online shopping and using the saved time to do more productive things. Internet has made various resources available online from technologies to food and clothes. This has actually helped people come across new stuff available in the market and save both the time and money wasted on trips to mall and in todays world having extra time is very important. So, Internet has made life of people very easy and convenient.
To conclude, I agree that internet has a positive effect on the life of people. This is because internet has helped people be financial independent, helps in increasing social awareness and made life of people easy and convenient.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...neficial and has positive effect on the peoples life. I think this way for three reason...
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Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...onsibility which is very important in a persons life. My own life experience is a compe...
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Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s. I am very fond of creative stuff, so i started a page on instagram where i use...
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Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... so i started a page on instagram where i used make various handmade gifts and se...
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Line 3, column 693, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... Internet has a positive effect on many individuals life as it gives various platform that ...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
..., the act that happened in kerala where a elephant and her baby was murdered made...
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Line 5, column 486, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... their voice against injustice which is a important factor that a person must hav...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...t and become back without anything as i didnt like it. As a result, i used to waste a...
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ything as i didnt like it. As a result, i used to waste alot of time making many ...
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Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun trip seems to be countable; consider using: 'many trips'.
Suggestion: many trips
...lt, i used to waste alot of time making many trip to the mall. But, now there are various...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, thus, while, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2345.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 491.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77596741344 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47209739053 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460285132383 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 759.6 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9942111099 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1923076923 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8846153846 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170311504196 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061143442977 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528894392774 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112602467597 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349836246631 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.