Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples
There has always been debatable arguments on the idea if young adults should be independent from early age or should live with their parents for longer time. This essay will discuss how being independent at early age is superior to living with parents for long
First, They say with great power comes great responsibility. As adults the individuals should be given freedom to make their own decisions. This will not only make them independent but also elevate the worldly knowledge which is required to survive this demanding world. Sincerity and responsibility are few examples of qualities which the individuals will undoubtedly imbibe from living in dependently. For instance, paying electricity bills on time will make one more responsible and sincere. Hence, individua's should start living by themselves from young age.
Second, Due to the generation gap the ideology and preferences of an individual may not match with their parents which can cause various issues. Such as, Arguments, quarrels, pugnacious behavior which in-turn can lead to grave consequences. For example, in the new era being awake till late night is common whereas for the old generation it will be considered as taboo and susceptible to unnecessary debates.
Living alone will give them their space and they can plan their leisure time accordingly
Third, once an individual is an adult and starts earning it would not be fair on the parents to continue paying for their children's expenses and basic needs when the parents would want to prioritize saving for their retirement. As the age progresses energy is compromised which is a sign to start saving up for future. In these circumstances if they will have to pay for their children's expenses then they may have a challenging time post retirement. Thus, if children would live independently, it would be a win win situation for both the sides
In essence, there are various advantages to both the parties, if one lives independently. Due to the above-mentioned reasons i believe young adults should start living by themselves as soon as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, hence, if, may, second, so, then, third, thus, whereas, as for, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18047337278 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8810385957 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55325443787 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5888132678 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.733333333 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312831451601 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106182384511 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737860164206 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165820611898 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501536421522 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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