old friends are important or new friends
Friends are an integral part of ones life. Some people believe it is more important to keep old friends than it is to make new friends. This essay will exhibit advantages of keeping old fiends closer.
Firstly, old friends from school and college grow together and mature together which creates an unbreakable bond between individuals. This pristine bond is such that old friends know each other in and out. For example, their strengths as well as weaknesses are thoroughly known which also helps bolster the loyalty amongst one another. Finding this level of integrity in a relationship is hard when a person is an adult and has significant responsibilities to cater to. Hence, keeping old friendships intact is superior.
Second, after a certain age it is considered difficult to make friends. A research from Harvard university states that one loses interest in making friends after they are occupied with jobs and businesses and are more of only colleagues. It becomes altogether more important to keep the friends one has has to share feelings and vent emotions
Third, one can only share secrets and problems with the friends who have been a part of their life for a long time. Specially in this covid era it has become cardinal to be able to share feelings in order to survive the depressing lockdowns. Studies have shown suicide rates have rapidly surged due to lockdowns. New friends would be unable to replicate the degree of comfort an old friend will be able to provide. Furthermore, since the friendship dates back to university days old friends will provide accurate advice and references which will elevate the well being of an individual significantly
In essence, old friends know each other the best and provide support which is required. In addition, making new friends is complex as working professionals. Hence, old friends are as valuable as gold.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-06-12 | YasamanEsml | 70 | view |
| 2023-06-09 | zahrazara | 70 | view |
| 2023-04-23 | Yam Kumar Oli | 60 | view |
| 2023-04-11 | sonyeoso | 70 | view |
| 2023-04-06 | fmichela | 60 | view |
- Painting 73
- Professors appearing on TV 85
- Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time Which of these situations do you think is better Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion B 68
- Some people think that parents should plan their children s leisure time carefully Other people believe those children should decide for themselves how to spend their free time Which idea do you agree with Give reasons for your choice 60
- old friends are important or new friends 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
Friends are an integral part of ones life. Some people believe it is more im...
^^^^
Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: Research
...s considered difficult to make friends. A research from Harvard university states that one...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: has
... more important to keep the friends one has has to share feelings and vent emotions ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 600, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ell being of an individual significantly In essence, old friends know each other ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...making new friends is complex as working professionals. Hence, old friends are as...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, so, third, well, as to, for example, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05144694534 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7052408348 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553054662379 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5634072825 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4117647059 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.473485009432 0.236089414692 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161294204975 0.076458572812 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139811231547 0.0737576698707 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299195583492 0.150856017488 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114907790975 0.0645574589148 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.