What do you want most in a friend - someone who is intelligent, or someone who has a sense of humor, or someone who is reliable? Which one of these characteristics is most important to you? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice.
When it comes to the issue the most important features of a best friend, people surely have variety opinions of this matter. According to my experience, I think that some characteristic of a friend is more significant than other factors. In the following, I explain my idea and try to express my reasoning.
The first and most important feature is that your friend should have a sense of humor. As we all know, we are working and living in a stress-rich environment, which impose plenty of heavy pressure on us. Hence, I think that having a friend, who can help us to laugh, is very necessary. He or she could make an intimacy atmosphere, brings happy for us, relives our stress, and helps us to stay healthy emotionally. After a busy day, you will enjoy nothing, but spending time with a witty friend, which fill you with fresh energy.
There is also a more quality we must consider. You never feel privacy, if a nosy person is your circumference. I think that there in no better example than myself when I was studying in the university. At that time, my friend and I rented a small apartment in downtown, where a large number of people lived in small houses. We as students, who were not supported by family and university, had to live there. One day, I detected that my friend opened my personal letters, which were of my girl friend. This was an unpleasant experience, which causes my girl friend left me. I think that the biggest advantage of having a trustworthy friend lies in the fact that you will have more privacy.
Apart from the points I made above, your friend should be a good listener. I think that we make friends to share their emotion and thinking with other. Best friends always devote time for listening to us, though they do not have all answers and solutions, but they give us a sense of belonging that we are not alone. Overall, human is a social creature and need to be understood by others, especially in sad and gloomy days, when they feel low.
Taking into account all of these factors, we may reach the conclusion that a best friend obviously should be a witty person, loyalty, and a goo listener. Admittedly, there are many traits that a best friend should have them, but these three characteristics have crucial effects on our friendship. Last but not least, let us hope that we pay more attention on our manner, and attempt to acquire attitude.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'apart from', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.186335403727 0.229887763892 81% => OK
Verbs: 0.155279503106 0.158761421928 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0890269151139 0.0866891130778 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0434782608696 0.046263068375 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.109730848861 0.0685040099705 160% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.105590062112 0.118717715034 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0248447204969 0.0351676179071 71% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6045730345 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0207039337474 0.0309702414327 67% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0828157349896 0.0887237588012 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0207039337474 0.0209618222197 99% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0207039337474 0.0139019557991 149% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2385.0 2387.08602151 100% => OK
No of words: 425.0 408.028673835 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61176470588 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.312941176471 0.338922669872 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.204705882353 0.251872472559 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.134117647059 0.174417080927 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0917647058824 0.112833075102 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6045730345 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548235294118 0.524397521467 105% => OK
Word variations: 63.9178866014 59.2087087015 108% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.4782608696 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7419907091 48.84282405 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.695652174 120.699889404 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4782608696 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.391304347826 0.644075263715 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 38.9488491049 45.7405998639 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.02684563758 1.45489161554 71% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274241846497 0.300154397459 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0765967676251 0.103427244359 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0651023895416 0.0752933317313 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.439444072689 0.497263757937 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122427412756 0.151897553556 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897579913659 0.114077575197 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519442618169 0.0781384742642 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.243912024102 0.336927656856 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0330417237932 0.067059652881 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171351906368 0.210909579961 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637000951462 0.0618886996521 103% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 16.0 8.42114695341 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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