What is your opinion Technology makes people s lives simpler while others claim that it makes people s lives more complicated | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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What is your opinion?
Technology makes people’s lives simpler, while others claim that it makes people’s lives more complicated.

In this day and age, technology is one of the significant fields in every human life. Some people state that technology makes life complex; however, I strongly advocate that technology brings people plenty of advantages that can make life simpler.
To begin with, technology has created many techniques that help people in different fields. Thanks to cleaning robots, it helps people to reduce the time they spend on housework. Some people state that it is hard to use robots; however, older people can use them easily with current development. For example, my mom is the one who does the housework the most, so I suggested that I buy a cleaning robot to help her. She said that after having a robot, the house is as clean as when she did the housework, which gives her more free time to do other work. Besides that, technology has given out many agrimotor, which can increase farmers' productivity. The agrimotor increases productivity and reduces the amount of work that farmers have to do, which makes farming simpler than the past agriculture works.
Another advantage that technology brings is that people can get close to each other. With the development of networks and social media, people from all over the world can connect and communicate with each other, making the impossible possible. In the past, if people worked or studied overseas, they could contact their parents by writing letters. However, life now is more straightforward. We can call or even video call through messenger or Instagram or even call facetime if you have an iPhone.
All things considered, as the benefits that technology brings to different fields, technology technique is a good tool for people. I believe technology will bring more and more new things that make human life become simpler.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, for example, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99663299663 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62263843866 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0653922195 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.75 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272614565425 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920647113161 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758707402981 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182235578204 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367376093538 0.0645574589148 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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