why go to university?
People attend college for various reasons. Some people consider college as a
challenge and others take it as a new experience. In my opinion, I think that
people attend college to increase knowledge, meet new people and develop a
career. Studying at a college can benefit a person greatly since it augments a
person's knowledge, aids in developing a career and gives a chance to meet new
people of different backgrounds.
Knowledge is such a powerful tool that possessing it can diminish nearly all
life problems. A college or a university is the place where one can gain
knowledge and become valuable to the society. An individual can acquire
knowledge about a wide variety of subjects. When my brother was in college,
he learned about bacteria and viruses. He had learned that at high school a little
bit, but in college he studied it in depth. In addition, he also learned how deal
with life problems in college.
Developing a career is a very important stage in our life. Most students, after
graduating from high schools, go to colleges or universities to be trained and
educated. Some major in various subjects while others go for professional
degrees. Universities help students in achieving their goals by preparing them
for the career they have picked. If I go to a medical school, I know that the
school will prepare me well enough for me to become a successful medical
doctor.
Interacting with new people is always a challenge. A university is a place
where people from different backgrounds get opportunities to interact with each
other. Information about different cultures, different life styles and certain types
of food is shared among students. My father used to study at a university, and
he told me about all the different cultural backgrounds of the students there.
A college or a university is the place where dreams can be fulfilled. The
subjects such as how to deal with life, how to interact with people and how to
become independent are taught and experienced there. A college or a university
makes an individual complete and help him/her to lead a successful life.
- the possibility of clay jars to be used as electric batteries in ancient times. 80
- The contribution of young people to the community 70
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- internet information 76
- why go to university? 71
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...t a person greatly since it augments a persons knowledge, aids in developing a career ...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 77, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...s. He had learned that at high school a little bit, but in college he studied it in depth....
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, i think, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03943661972 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8792756258 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498591549296 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6773506698 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3181818182 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1363636364 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 28.0 4.53405017921 618% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122021891266 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395040234687 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572792875655 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0372708709889 0.150856017488 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639371775867 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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