Why people attend college and university?
The people attend to a college and university for many reasons. However, from my point of view, there are three main reasons that explain why people attend university and college. The following paragraphs will elaborate and illustrate these reasons with examples.
First, nowadays high paid Job opportunities depends on college and university degrees. If one looks for a job, even in a small company, getting employed requires an advanced college or university degree. Most of the jobs nowadays are complicated than before, that requires advanced academic and professional education, training and skills. Without these educations and training it is not possible to meet the requirements of the jobs.
The rate of unemployment is also high in most countries around the globe, so there is a competition in employment in a high paid job, and even in all jobs. An advanced college and university degree will the person succeed in this competition for employment.
Second, attending in a university or college provides a good opportunity for networking. Today a good and efficient network is of quite importance for finding a good job through the network that one can establish during studying in a university and college. You meet many people in the universities including the professors, students and others who would help you find good job and enrich your networking opportunity. Nowadays most of the universities are leading the projects that one can find employment in. I have a friend who find a good job in one of the university project. And then he found new employment opportunities through working in that project and this network.
Third, Universities and colleges are the only institutions that produces high quality and up-to-date knowledge and information in all areas of human knowledge through carrying out researches. An advance level of knowledge that are obtained in university and college will allow a person to understand the world events and natural phenomena. This an absolutely personal reason for some people.
Forth, some people attend to university and college for its prestige. Obtaining an advanced university and college degree would enhance one’s social status among her/his peers. This could be the case in most cultural settings that acknowledge the value of knowledge and culture.
In conclusion, attending university and college facilitate finding a good job with high salary, provide networking opportunity, update the knowledge and information of the attendee and finally is prestigious and enhance the person social status.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, look, second, so, then, third, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2193.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4552238806 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95926654489 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482587064677 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 692.1 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6554650355 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6818181818 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.59090909091 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383621457364 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132336693705 0.076458572812 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143179060741 0.0737576698707 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208648392594 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117626463913 0.0645574589148 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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