Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
In the current age, the constructions of houses are more modern than early age. Many people are like to live in modern house, they are trying to use all modern amenities and facilities offer in-house. But I always prefer to live in traditional house; the supporting reasons and examples are explained in following essay.
Firstly, the construction of traditional house is very unique, normally they are made by using all natural constructing equipment's, like wood, sand, rock etc. The traditional houses are not too much cold in winter and not too much hot in summer. They are constructed like to keep up their internal temperature in every conditions, it has not required any kind of AC or heater. In my village I have a traditional house, which is still maintain like early. In Marathi we called that house as “Wada”, the construction of Wada is very unique, and it maintains the proper height.
Secondly, in traditional house we can also do modern change. We can change interior design of house very easy; also fix all modern amenities which we like. In my house we make an interiors like sofas, kitchen. My house content large porch area as well as a larger space for garden front and back side of house. Instead of that, modern apartment building has less space for play ground and garden. They are much compact and the circulation of free natural air is route through the AC or by fans.
Thirdly, the traditional house is help to save money. Due to large space in traditional houses the natural air is passes very easy, so the necessity of other equipment like AC and fan not required. It saves the cost of equipment and electricity. In my traditional house all amenities are present which are needed for human like bathrooms, etc.
In conclusion, my family is already living in tradition house; it has all amenities which are required to human. Also we can make various modifications in it.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-07 | sandiphinge86@gmail.com | 60 | view |
- If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change. Use reason and specific examples to support your answer. 61
- Do you agree or disagree with following statement. It is better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group. Use specific reason and examples to support your answer. 65
- Some people like doing work by hand. others prefer using machines. which do you prefer 61
- Grades encourage students to work harder at school 88
- What are some important qualities of good supervisor. use specific details ans examples to explain why these qualities are important 68
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In the current age, the constructions of...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...les are explained in following essay. Firstly, the construction of traditional...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: VERY_UNIQUE[1]
Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
...he construction of traditional house is very unique, normally they are made by using all na...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'maintained'.
Suggestion: maintained
...ave a traditional house, which is still maintain like early. In Marathi we called that h...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 554, Rule ID: VERY_UNIQUE[1]
Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
...Wada', the construction of Wada is very unique, and it maintains the proper height. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., and it maintains the proper height. Secondly, in traditional house we can al...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r is route through the AC or by fans. Thirdly, the traditional house is help t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...needed for human like bathrooms, etc. In conclusion, my family is already livi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 134, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... amenities which are required to human. Also we can make various modifications in it...
^^^^
Line 9, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e can make various modifications in it.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, well, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83282674772 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75278603442 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519756838906 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0024999024 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.45 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207973863075 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694652071905 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565959956775 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126278784478 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643474302274 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.