Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
I’m 23 years old man and I always think that I have to enjoy my young life. I agree with the idea that young people enjoy their lives than older people do. I offer two reasons for this.
First, young people have healthy bodies. When people get older, they must lose their ability to enjoy some intense sports or to go to far places in the world. For instance, I belong to the basketball club of my university, and I really enjoy my club activities. However, basketball is a very intense sport and we need to keep in very good shape and to have a powerful body, so I will lose my abilities to play basketball in the future. I won’t be able to enjoy my favorite sport because of getting older.
Second, young people have clever brain and ability to memory many things. So we, young people, can try to study new things. As older people get, their thinking is slower and they lose ability to remember something. I think trying to study new thing and making improvement in the area is the most interesting thing in the life. Young people can try to study anything by using their flesh brain and strong memory. However, old people can’t think something quickly and their memory is weaker than young people, so it is more difficult for older people to try to study something than young people.
Some people may refute me by saying that older people have more money than younger people have, so older people can enjoy their lives by using their abundant money. I think this suggestion makes no sense. Does anyone can buy the fun of playing basketball by money? In my view, to enjoy what only young people can do is priceless. Many old people will choose going back to younger days than receiving one million dollars.
That’s why I agree with the opinion. I will continue to give much value to my young life, and enjoy it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possibly wrong usage of 'Does' in the question. Did you mean: 'can anyone'.
Suggestion: Can anyone
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Line 7, column 359, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to go'.
Suggestion: to go
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, really, second, so, for instance, i think, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56626506024 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23940060776 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490963855422 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8366617728 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1904761905 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8095238095 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.515642483298 0.236089414692 218% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156417253764 0.076458572812 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151624169905 0.0737576698707 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312802703141 0.150856017488 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137654632348 0.0645574589148 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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