your job has a greater effect to your overall happiness than your
social life does.
When being asked which exert a greater effect on my overall happiness, the response will be a boilerplate answer, my job. In my view, this demonstrates how our occupation plays a pivotal role in our daily lives. I would like to provide several reasons to substantiate the statement.
First of all, a sense of achievement ensure my happiness, and my work is capable of bringing me such joyful feeling. In fact, For example, as a formal employer in a national science lab, I always need to sacrifice my social life to my occupation. However, after contributing a whole month to figure out a plan to resolve the serious air pollution problem in my country, and eventually witnessed the program practiced well, I certainly feel proud of what I had done without mentioning the major sacrifices. Clearly, my job makes a satisfying life possible.
Secondly, providing my family members with the high living standard will be the happiest event for me, and working hard in the office could definitely enable me to achieve the goal. Once again my own experience can be cited as an instance. Even though I always feel exhausted after work, seeing my dearest parents could comfortably sit on a luxurious sofa, and enjoying delicious cuisines without thinking of any economic problems always relieve my stress. On the contrary, if I only put emphasis on my social life, eventually I could feel nothing but empty. As a result, my career is considered to give my overall happiness due to the salaries I earned from it.
Last but not least, reputation enables my happiness and investing time in my occupation always raises me to a higher social status. For example, last year, after I finished a book which related to the world-famous greenhouse effect, a multitude of well-known celebrities, such as the conductor of United Nations, lined up for the chances to discuss such great issue with me. While I witness what I had done brought me such fertile feedbacks as reputation, a sense of satisfaction came to my mind. As a consequence, the reputation which rooted from my work performance results in my delightful lifetime.
To conclude, even though some sophisticated people uphold that social life benefits our life most, I ponder it is our job that makes a satisfying life journey possible. That is to say, with respect to a sense of achievement, material needs and reputation, I believe the advantages provided by career outweigh the ones given from social activities.
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- TPO30 70
- Workers would be more satisfied if they have various kinds of work to do during workday instead of doing the same job all day long. 70
- TPO40Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how the proposal discussed in the lecture would solve the specific challenges described in the reading passage. 80
- TPO34 90
- Some people think that the important role of university professors is todo research, others think the main role of them is to educate students. 76
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in fact, such as, as a result, first of all, in my view, on the contrary, with respect to, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2057.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96859903382 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90122360658 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57729468599 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6409086973 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.277777778 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88888888889 5.45110844103 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0825422987268 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032838949668 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467407178356 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0575974217284 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265811308939 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.