It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Even though some people keep the view that it is the waste of the time and energy to know about the events all around the world if it is not affect to their, but in my opinion this statement is fundamentally correct; knowing happenstance in all around the world is in our benefit; and I believe it helps us to get the best decision. therefore, I generally agree with the statement and I want to reinforce my opinion from the following aspect.
The first reason why I generally agree with statement In my opinion all the things happens in the world in deliberate ways have their own influence in our life. We have to know what is happen and then analysis it to get a clear view of it's probable effects in our life.
The second reason why I generally agree with statement is that in the large scale all of the governments in all around the world have some interactions with each other. For example, we have trade with some of them. we explore some thing to them and so on. Consequently, if we know what happens in the world and how it is effects to our costumers so that we could manage our stocks as well as possible
In the final analysis, I think that we would help to other people in all around the world and be their voice. For example, When a earthquake happens in one part of the world, we have to know to help them. Moreover, says their need to other peoples. Another example is that, when we see how the climate changes affected to environment other part of the world, we can get lessons from them to manage our sources.
In sum, For managing of our life and getting the best choses we have to know about the important happenstance in all around the world. Asides, we try to know about the earlier peoples and animals live and understands what is the cause of their extinction to get lessons form them. Otherwise, we can't improve our societies. We have to see the effect of the air pollution and lack of water to educate to our chilrens the importance of it. Base on the reasons I mentioned above, I totally agree with statement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, well, for example, i think, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 57.0 22.412803532 254% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 30.3222958057 218% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1373.03311258 122% => OK
No of words: 379.0 270.72406181 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41160949868 5.08290768461 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44504343751 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.437994722955 0.540411800872 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 419.366225166 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 3.25607064018 338% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.9338661944 49.2860985944 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 110.228320801 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6875 21.698381199 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06452816374 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20080130335 0.272083759551 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710571004667 0.0996497079465 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775360633794 0.0662205650399 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133413000712 0.162205337803 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419418845856 0.0443174109184 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 53.8541721854 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.2367328918 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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