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The reading passage introduces three solutions in order to prevent injuries to birds. On the other hand, the speaker claims that these solutions are not practical due to the following reasons.
First, even though the reading passage states that using the one-way glass helps birds to understand that the glass is a barrier and they do not go through it, the speaker points out that as far as the one-way glass reflects like mirror it is not practical to avoid birds hitting all the times since it may reflect the sky or tree and the birds cannot realize they are not real sky and tree and fly through it.
Second, despite the statements in the reading passage that colorful designs such as colorful painted patterns or lines on glass helps the birds to distinguish between glass and open air, the lecturer claims that in order to achieve such an aforementioned goal, the no painted holes in the gloss should be too small otherwise the birds cannot detect it as barrier, and in this way the room for the people become too dark and it is not appropriate.
Finally, the reading passage argues that by sending electromagnets signals, we can change the direction of the birds to a suitable one as far as they have organs which can detect magnetic field. Conversely, the speaker brings up with the idea that the birds only use their magnetic compass in their long travelling and distances, for example from cold climate to the warm climate. But in the city they use other organs and means such as their eyes and brightness of light to find their way. Hence, this idea is ruled out.
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- A company is going to give some money either to support the arts or to protect the environment. Which do you think the company should choose? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was whenour grandparents were children. 76
- Universities should spend more money in buying facilities than hiring famous professors. 81
- Which would you choose: a higher pay job with long hours or an average pay job with normal work hours? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details. 70
- Young people should try many different kinds of jobs or career before they decide the long term career of their life 78
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'conversely', 'finally', 'first', 'hence', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.259136212625 0.261695866417 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.12292358804 0.158904122519 77% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0830564784053 0.0723426182421 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0598006644518 0.0435111971325 137% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0498338870432 0.0277247811725 180% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116279069767 0.128828473217 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0166112956811 0.0370669169778 45% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.34821466231 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0332225913621 0.0208969081088 159% => OK
Particles: 0.00996677740864 0.00154638098197 645% => OK
Determiners: 0.119601328904 0.128158765124 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0199335548173 0.0158828679856 126% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00664451827243 0.0114777025283 58% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1578.0 1645.83664459 96% => OK
No of words: 279.0 271.125827815 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65591397849 6.08160592843 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.04852973271 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.304659498208 0.374372842146 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.225806451613 0.287516216867 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.114695340502 0.187439937562 61% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0645161290323 0.113142543107 57% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34821466231 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537634408602 0.539623497131 100% => OK
Word variations: 53.8650859971 53.8517498576 100% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0529801325 61% => OK
Sentence length: 34.875 21.7502111507 160% => OK
Sentence length SD: 142.875328084 49.3711431718 289% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.25 132.220823453 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.875 21.7502111507 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 0.878197800319 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.39072847682 0% => OK
Readability: 57.4556451613 50.5018328374 114% => OK
Elegance: 1.68571428571 1.90840788429 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.635457047147 0.549887131256 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.215634373196 0.142949733639 151% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.128603049574 0.0787303798458 163% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.69193431375 0.631733273073 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.253386656306 0.139662658121 181% => Sentences are changing often in a paragraphs.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.318023104942 0.266732575781 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139274359778 0.103435571967 135% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.44618304616 0.414875509568 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0665870226089 0.0530846634433 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.458356083599 0.40443939384 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619429230543 0.0528353158467 117% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.26048565121 23% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.49668874172 143% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.62251655629 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.1766004415 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 10.2958057395 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.