It is more harmful to compromise one’s own beliefs than adhere to them.
Many believe a person has to have one’s own beliefs and do the right things following the beliefs. However, the beliefs are not always compatible with social conventions. So, the argument is agreeable only to a certain extent.
Admittedly, it is important to have one’s own beliefs and follow that beliefs when commit a certain action. There are many historical figures that have been lauded by many people because he or she didn’t compromise one’s own beliefs and acted persistently with strong conscience. For example, in Japanese colonial era, there were many Koreans who resisted to follow Japanese unfair treatments for Korean and kept fighting for independence. Ann Jung Geun was one of those resisting Koreans as well. He sacrificed himself to fight against Japanese army and to protect Korean people. He strongly believed colonizing is inhumane which destroys one’s nation and identity. He followed his belief until he died in a prison and he became a historical figure who praised by many Koreans until now. So, having sound beliefs and keep devoting oneself to high-level value is not only easy but also laudable.
Nevertheless, one’s beliefs are not always righteous and make good consequences for overall society. Some selfish people could have selfish beliefs that only put him or herself in the center. The actions following those beliefs cause bad influence for overall society. For example, Osama Bin Laden had strong religious beliefs, so, to keep his beliefs, he committed terrors and killed many non-Islamic people. The consequences were disastrous and entire non-Islamic society got into chaotic confusion. Many Islamic people also received bad influences because some of countries banned their entrances at the airports. So, his dogmatic attitude towards his beliefs caused nothing but plights.
In sum, if one’s beliefs are sound and righteous, it is important to do not comprise one’s belief with outer force. In contrast, if one’s beliefs are biased and harmful for overall society, one should compromise one’s beliefs and follow general conscience and laws for public good.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'resisted following'.
Suggestion: resisted following
...lonial era, there were many Koreans who resisted to follow Japanese unfair treatments for Korean a...
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Line 3, column 688, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...estroys one's nation and identity. He followed his belief until he died in a ...
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Line 5, column 565, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the countries') or simply say ''some countries''.
Suggestion: some of the countries; some countries
...le also received bad influences because some of countries banned their entrances at the airports....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, as to, for example, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 334.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45508982036 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73238985485 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553892215569 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0529599321 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.1 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281465294999 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961336666587 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105421392047 0.0758088955206 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209780585749 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104644291051 0.0667264976115 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.