Some people say that physical exercise should be a required part of every school day. Other people believe that students should spend the whole school day on academic studies. Which opinion do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer
Some people opinion that students more time spend in study and other people think that students should give some of the time for physical exercise in school. In my vantage point, Students require physical exercise in small part every day school because students get vast of benefits which are describes in forthcoming paragraphs.
Firstly, Physical activity it is not means that only yoga but school management also arrange sport period in which various kind of game select of each day so it is helpful for students. They are enjoying the each games such as kho-kho, basketball, racing, badminton and so on... all this game also one kind of exercise so students not feel tired because they are exhaust to whole day monotonous study. But after short break they feel fresh and give more concentration in study. In addition, this exercise, yoga, and sport game all this cause the increase the interaction between the students. I saw that some of my classmates are very shy nature and they are not talk to anyone but when I was playing with them they are openly talked with me. Therefore, it is help to some students who not open minded.
Secondly, Students get the advantage of the exercise because it is maintain body healthier, stronger and active. Yoga and exercise is assisted to decrease the chance of serious disease such as obesity and diabetes type 2. Physical activity useful aid to Improves the brain function such as increase the blood and oxygen flow in brain cause improve mood and feel relax. All this merit to students get the positive energy and increase the learning capacity.
Lastly, school meaning is not only learn academic studies but also it is one stage that students is put their other interest in which they are expert show their performance. Physical exercise, sport game and yoga is types of entertainment and fun cause the students are feel happy and refresh their minds.
In conclusion, my point of view, Students should spend some time in physical exercise in every school day because it is gives the immense benefit to students body.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... people think that students should give some of the time for physical exercise in school. I...
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Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'maintained'.
Suggestion: maintained
...advantage of the exercise because it is maintain body healthier, stronger and active. Yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89458689459 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40648847075 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487179487179 0.524837075471 93% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6396621675 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.375 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9375 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290749085895 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920606977144 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102628026454 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192494293887 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133335354601 0.0645574589148 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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