International travel has many advantages to both travellers and the country that they visited. Do Advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that the development of foreign tourism has brought a lot of benefits for not only host country but also visitors. While there are many serious consequences because of this growth, I still believe that the advantages are much bigger than the drawbacks.
On the one hand, there are some black corners of global travel - the principal issue is commercial tourism. To visitors' perspective, they often travel to oversea destinations with worrying about service prices boosted to the higher levels. They may be overcharged for everything from taxi fees to a meal in a restaurants or just a small souvenir for their beloved relatives. In host country, long-term waste treatment problems are destroying the environment perpetually. For example, lots of resorts on the beaches of Vietnam and Thailand concreted due to hotels and high-rise hotels and buildings for Western tourists.
On the other hand, although these problems mentioned above are very seriuos, we can not ignore and admit the huge benefits from developing international tourism. The first one is, the fierce competition between tourist firms, absolutely, increases the value of travel packages, so, visitors can maximize their experiences of a foreign country where they are traveling and its culture. The second is the more travelers come to a country the more jobs created owing to the fact that all services are increasingly increased. Hospital staffs will be paid higher salary in order to raise their living standard.
In conclusion, I think that international tourism brings more advantages for both visitors and foreign countries than its downsides.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 307, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a restaurant' or simply 'restaurants'?
Suggestion: a restaurant; restaurants
... everything from taxi fees to a meal in a restaurants or just a small souvenir for their belo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, second, so, still, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31782945736 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84924819768 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639534883721 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6974900153 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.333333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226768536684 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704418523372 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622468208496 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134539730643 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406280619926 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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