People should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet
It is argued that people should eat the vegetarian meal instead of eating meat in order to have a good diet for health. In my opinion, I agree with this view but we should also eat a little meat to maintain your body.
On the one hand, eating vegetarian meal have some benefits for your health. Firstly, vegetables provide so much vitamin and fiber, which is essential for your skin. As a result, they not only make you look younger than your age but your heart is also healthy. Secondly, having regular vegetarian meals help you prevent a lot of disorders and keep you fit. Especially, they can decrease the risk of cancer. For example, one should eat vegetarian meals at least three days a week to have a healthy life.
On the other hand, besides becoming vegetarian, there are strong reasons why everyone also needs to eat a little meat. The first reason is that protein from meat provide full energy for your body, especially children really need it to grow up. Another reason is that your brain and heart are sustained well by the composition of meat. Moreover, eating meat makes your body stronger, namely muscles and bones. For instance, if you feel tired or dizzy, you have to supply more nutrition from meat.
In conclusion, while people think that they should become vegetarian, I suggest that meat is also important to our healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72573839662 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3239562535 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603375527426 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.0355626965 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.0 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385298817881 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136049730508 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10984440382 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265261314355 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694624034402 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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