Manned space flight is costly and dangerous. Moreover, the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men and women into space. Therefore, we should invest our resources in unmanned space flight.
This statement is about executing unmanned space is less costly and dangerous than manned space flights, accordingly, they suggest investing their resources in unnmanned space flights. However, this statement does not provide sufficient evince in order to convince and have some fallacies in their logical reasoning, without considering and providing these, they should not conduct their plan.
Firstly, they assert that manned space is costly and dangerous but they do not elaborate this statement in detail. To put it another way, they can advert about some deleterious previous experiences or risky occasions which they have handled with before. For instance, they could compared the costs of two methods deliberately and discussed about what information they have contributed. In fact, there is a prospect that this judgement can be related to manipulation belonging to founders of unmanned space in order to promote their new device, in this case, risk of mannered flights is just rootless and speculative. In the aim of warranting themselves, such evidences and examples should be supplied in order to fortify their dissatisfaction about performance and obstacles of previous devices.
Secondly, there is a devoid of elaborative information, that is to say, they point out that unmanned devices will provide more information with a more precautious way, however, they do not explicate how they will accomplish this. For instance, they can provide some features which make unable them and some additional precautionary systems. In addition, they can prove that how they worked on this project meticulously and what they have aimed to resolve compared to manned flight by means of which facilites. Without such vital details, this statement seem wishful thinking rather than presenting an innovation.
Thirdly, they focus on dangers and costs of mannered space flights and there are overlooked some potential hazardous consequences of unmannered flights. To put it another way, this statements seems strongly and obstusely opposed to mannered flight and undoubtedly in favor of unmannered flight. For instance, unmannered devices will not be able to handle system failures during their flight in contrast to opportunity of problem solving of human driver, accordingly, this may demand more costs to them than they expect. As a result, instead of a blind faith, they should contemplate on overlooked risks and implications of unmannered flights in the aim granting ameliorated results compared to before.
All things considered, before taking any action or conducting investment, they should provide these necessary details and reckon on possible negative drawbacks of unmannered flights despite of its enhancements.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Secondly, there is a devoid of elaborative information, that is to say, they point out that unmanned devices will provide more information with a more precautious way, however, they do not explicate how they will accomplish this.
Error: elaborative Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: precautious Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: In addition, they can prove that how they worked on this project meticulously and what they have aimed to resolve compared to manned flight by means of which facilites.
Error: facilites Suggestion: facilities
Sentence: Thirdly, they focus on dangers and costs of mannered space flights and there are overlooked some potential hazardous consequences of unmannered flights.
Error: unmannered Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: To put it another way, this statements seems strongly and obstusely opposed to mannered flight and undoubtedly in favor of unmannered flight.
Error: obstusely Suggestion: obscurely
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argument 1 -- OK
argument 2 -- not exactly
argument 3 -- not OK
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flaws:
In GRE, we need to accept those data or evidence are true or enough, and then try to find out loopholes.
Let's analyze the structure of the statement and argue accordingly:
condition 1:
Manned space flight is costly and dangerous. //1. maybe unmanned space flight is costly too. Need to compare. 2. the author assumes that in proportion to the growth of technology that makes unmanned space flight possible, there will not be a corresponding rise in technology & hence, safety levels, of manned space flight.
condition 2:
Moreover, the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men and women into space. //1. stating "the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites", the author assumes that this is the case for all unmanned space ventures in recent history. 2. the author assumes that all & every type of information that can be obtained through a manned space flight can be obtained through an unmanned space flight.
conclusion:
Therefore, we should invest our resources in unmanned space flight. // the author assumes that the level of technology required for widespread unmanned space flight currently exists. while maybe not.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 415 350
No. of Characters: 2256 1500
No. of Different Words: 213 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.513 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.436 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.822 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 179 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 143 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 100 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 70 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.938 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.189 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.688 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.325 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.563 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.082 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sting their resources in unnmanned space flights. However, this statement does n...
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Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es in unnmanned space flights. However, this statement does not provide sufficie...
^^
Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'compare'
Suggestion: compare
... with before. For instance, they could compared the costs of two methods deliberately a...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 355, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nal precautionary systems. In addition, they can prove that how they worked on t...
^^
Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...annered flights. To put it another way, this statements seems strongly and obstusely...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, in addition, in contrast, in fact, as a result, in contrast to, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 11.1786427146 170% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 28.8173652695 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 55.5748502994 113% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 16.3942115768 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2319.0 2260.96107784 103% => OK
No of words: 415.0 441.139720559 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58795180723 5.12650576532 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90281346748 2.78398813304 104% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 204.123752495 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522891566265 0.468620217663 112% => OK
syllable_count: 708.3 705.55239521 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 4.96107784431 363% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.22255489022 237% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.264744099 57.8364921388 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.9375 119.503703932 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9375 23.324526521 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 5.70786347227 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162898199083 0.218282227539 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669515485641 0.0743258471296 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521667903033 0.0701772020484 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100371448258 0.128457276422 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511555522509 0.0628817314937 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 14.3799401198 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.3550499002 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.197005988 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.5979740519 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.32208582834 118% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 98.500998004 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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