Do you agree or disagree cars destroy out live

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Do you agree or disagree cars destroy out live

There are two views over whatever cars damage our life or not, while some people argue they totally destroy our live, others have opposed of this opinion. As far as I am concerned, the merits of automobile outweigh its disadvantage. To shed light, why I have this belief, there are two main reasons, which should be discussed in the following essay.
They make our live more convenient and suitable. To be more specific, car is a fantastic provided facility, which one can use everywhere and every time. On the other hand, one cannot have access metros or trains anytime if she or he really needs them. For instance, since I went to college, I bought a beautiful car, which always I had in my dreams. As my college was far from my home by my car, I could easily reach without any problem. Moreover, when I was tired to drive, I stopped it, and I had relaxed in during the rout. But one day, my car failed to use it. So I used train to go college. I think it would not exaggeration, if I said that day was one my worse day; nor did I sleep for one minute due to the fact others in the train just talked and laughed in the rest of rout.
Despite of few drawbacks, they are very inexpensive and reasonable. Even though metro and train are faster, they are too much expensive. Nonetheless, cars make weather more polluted than other system transportation. One can be utilized them with no money compare with other vehicles. For example, I above mentioned, I had a car. One summer, my family and I went to a trip to Tehran by car for one weak. Thus, we took everything if we need. Therefore, we met variety of new places, which we never saw, just by spending a little money. However, when my friend went to Tehran by train, they spent quit a few money. Moreover, they did not really enjoy, for they were not free to go everywhere because they had not a personal car.
To sum it up, with all into account, I subscribe to that automobile is one of the best vehicles, not only are they cheap, but also they are helpful.

There are two views over whatever cars damage our life or not, while some people argue they totally destroy our live, others have opposed of this opinion. As far as I am concerned, the merits of automobile outweigh its disadvantage. To shed light, why I have this belief, there are two main reasons, which should be discussed in the following essay.
They make our live more convenient and suitable. To be more specific, car is a fantastic provided facility, which one can use everywhere and every time. On the other hand, one cannot have access metros or trains anytime if she or he really needs them. For instance, since I went to college, I bought a beautiful car, which always I had in my dreams. As my college was far from my home by my car, I could easily reach without any problem. Moreover, when I was tired to drive, I stopped it, and I had relaxed in during the rout. But one day, my car failed to use it. So I used train to go college. I think it would not exaggeration, if I said that day was one my worse day; nor did I sleep for one minute due to the fact others in the train just talked and laughed in the rest of rout.
Despite of few drawbacks, they are very inexpensive and reasonable. Even though metro and train are faster, they are too much expensive. Nonetheless, cars make weather more polluted than other system transportation. One can be utilized them with no money compare with other vehicles. For example, I above mentioned, I had a car. One summer, my family and I went to a trip to Tehran by car for one weak. Thus, we took everything if we need. Therefore, we met variety of new places, which we never saw, just by spending a little money. However, when my friend went to Tehran by train, they spent quit a few money. Moreover, they did not really enjoy, for they were not free to go everywhere because they had not a personal car.
To sum it up, with all into account, I subscribe to that automobile is one of the best vehicles, not only are they cheap, but also they are helpful.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 599, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'few money'.
Suggestion: few money
...ent to Tehran by train, they spent quit a few money. Moreover, they did not really enjoy, f...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 601, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...t to Tehran by train, they spent quit a few money. Moreover, they did not really en...
^^^
Line 4, column 601, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun money seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little money'.
Suggestion: little money
...t to Tehran by train, they spent quit a few money. Moreover, they did not really enjoy, f...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 599, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'few money'.
Suggestion: few money
...ent to Tehran by train, they spent quit a few money. Moreover, they did not really enjoy, f...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 601, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...t to Tehran by train, they spent quit a few money. Moreover, they did not really en...
^^^
Line 9, column 601, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun money seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little money'.
Suggestion: little money
...t to Tehran by train, they spent quit a few money. Moreover, they did not really enjoy, f...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, really, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 110.0 43.0788530466 255% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 52.1666666667 157% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3284.0 1977.66487455 166% => OK
No of words: 752.0 407.700716846 184% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3670212766 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.23666099739 4.48103885553 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4596434297 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.288563829787 0.524837075471 55% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1078.2 618.680645161 174% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 32.0 9.59856630824 333% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 16.0 3.51792114695 455% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 14.0 4.94265232975 283% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 46.0 20.6003584229 223% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2151901231 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3913043478 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.347826087 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95652173913 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 18.0 3.85842293907 467% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.88709677419 327% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.088031569762 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278973881555 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353079025496 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0508817188061 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030945496483 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.75 8.01818996416 72% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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