Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that whether hobbies are relatively difficult or not depends on each person. Personally, I believe that both types of hobbies can be fun but I also contend that people will be more fascinated when joining difficult hobbies.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why both types of hobbies, easy or difficult one are interesting to selective people and it is hard to say which is more enjoyable. People choosing their hobbies depends on their physical conditions, talent or wishes. For example, a well-built man is keen on weightlifting because he has already had a good looking body and he wants to be more healthy. In contrast, with the same desire of good health, a woman who is not well-built as the man will find weightlifting not exciting at all. Instead, she chooses aerobics, which is easier to follow than the strenuous activity. As a result, to distinguish which amusement is difficult is not absolutely reasonable in every circumstance because each type of hobbies brings different feelings to each person.
On the other hand, the more challenging a hobby is, the more pleasure it can bring to an individual. The difficult hobbies usually require people more skills, knowledge and time to be more adept at. When they reach a higher level of performance during the training or practicing these activities, they will gain better achievements and then greater contentments. For example, designing on a computer is a hobby that requires a high sense of aesthetics and a wide knowledge of tools. In my case, it took me around two years before becoming competent in the hobby. Now I enjoy much more than I did when I started learning it.
In conclusion, it is absurd to compare onerous hobbies to simple ones because a hobby can bring different feelings of excitement to participants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92810457516 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87439804566 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562091503268 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1383760319 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.533333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195923427721 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647857282404 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743701529569 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136230811004 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815759396454 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.