Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time.

Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

"The ability of uniqueness in humans' creativity is what makes us different from other species", said by Jack Reacher. Humans are born with different capability and it should not be diverted into a single streamline. Some people are concerned more about their child's future and have a believe that teaching art is a wastage of time, while other that if their child is interested or creative in art then he should select it as his career path. Art is an indispensible subject that needs to be part of teaching at school.

Some people think that the future of art is unsuccessful and want their children to be a doctor or an engineer. For them these are the most respectful and highly paid professions. While neglecting their child's interest, they want them to follow a same pattern that everyone else is following for their career path. And for them teaching arts and other related subjects are nothing and just simply a waste of time, they just want the school to add only those subjects in their curriculum that will help them in their career path.

It has been observed that people are more successful when their passion becomes their profession. Regardless of what other thinks, there are plenty of parents whose focus is in their child's ability and what they are good at it. For them, their child should select a career path on the basis of their interest. They want their kids to taste all the flavors of each subjects including art, so that they can find their hidden talent.

In my opinion, the importance of arts should not be neglected, as it plays a vital role in everyone's daily routine. Art represents and differentiate your country at an international level. We should allow our children to decide their career path, whether it is photography, music, painting, doctor or engineer. The key to happiness is working what you like. At the end, if a person works with a passion, he will definitely reach the top of the success.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 293, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...more about their childs future and have a believe that teaching art is a wastage of time,...
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Line 1, column 295, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...re about their childs future and have a believe that teaching art is a wastage of time,...
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Line 7, column 393, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...like. At the end, if a person works with a passion, he will definitely reach the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, while, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78698224852 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58472890272 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529585798817 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4206026145 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1764705882 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224869931852 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765132795321 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737309265419 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140809401618 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056004980208 0.056905535591 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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