Fresh water becomes a global problem for the world What are the causes of it What measures government and individual should take to resolve to the problem Give reason for your answer

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Fresh water becomes a global problem for the world. What are the causes of it? What
measures government and individual should take to resolve to the problem? Give reason for
your answer.

The dearth of fresh water is the burning issue globally. As every human being completely
depend upon the pure water for the survival, the government and the individuals have to take
necessary steps to save the water for them and as well as for the future generation.
To begin with the human beings and their activities are the major cause for the dearth of fresh
water. The consumption of the water for the humans are getting increased as population
increases. At this rate, there will be a demand for drinking water may lead to beginning of the
human extinct. In many ways, the water is getting polluted by improper management in sewage
and drainage. In addition, the government also focusing on extending the industrialization, but
this is also one of the causes for water pollution. Furthermore, they are permitting the
industries for logging which leads to deforestation.
In order to overcome this issue, the government has to take immediate actions for reserving
pure water by creating awareness campaign among the people. They should implement new
projects for extracting pure water from drainage or sea water. Also, they should make strict
rules and regulations in preserving the water and whomsoever breaking the law, should get
penalized heavily. But most importantly, the government should concentrate on harvesting
rain. Equally, the individuals have to step forward and give full support to the government in
preserving the fresh water for the future generation.
In conclusion, both the government have to step up and make futuristic and pro-active
measurements in saving the water and every individual have to come out from their ignorance
and should realize that if they save water today, the water will save them tomorrow.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, well, as for, as to, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27561837456 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8671074118 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519434628975 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2302348081 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.642857143 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267067866758 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107195882047 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466989602628 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931823807027 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419055534708 0.056905535591 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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