Essay topics: Students should be required to stay in school until the age of eighteen.' To what extent do you agree or isagree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and /or examples from your own experience.
Education plays a pivotal role and is a cornerstone of every individual's life. The age of graduation from school is a debatable topic. The proponents argue that the appropriate age for graduating from school should be 18 years. This essay will describe why the students should stay at school until 18 years.
Firstly, a proper education is the stepping stone to a person's success. An education with stronger foundation will help the students achieve more in their life. In addition, the students will learn more life skills, they develop grit and perseverance, and passion during their schooling years which will eventually lead them to success. For instance, a majority of the Oxford University graduates are mature and were able to make right decisions since the minimum age requirement for a bachelor degree is 18 years. As a result, students are mature enough and learns the necessary skills during their schooling years.
Secondly, a majority of pupils tend to grow smarter and they themselves influence their life by choosing the right field of study when applying for a university. Moreover, prolonged exposure to schooling system will develop altruism among the students which will make them better citizens. To exemplify, the ancient education system in India and China requires the student to stay, learn, and implement what they learned for 21 years before they are permitted to leave the school for further studies. Therefore, the students attain good behavior and can decide and develop their own future.
Finally, this essay explained the benefits of prolonged schooling years for students and how it will impact positively on their success. In my opinion, the graduation age for schooling should be made mandatory by the government for the welfare of the country and the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...otal role and is a cornerstone of every individuals life. The age of graduation from school...
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Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...er education is the stepping stone to a persons success. An education with stronger fou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23448275862 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65009815177 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537931034483 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 10.0 1.56157635468 640% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6092167856 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17091261485 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686118327476 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543955583914 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122363635323 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511934057783 0.0609392437508 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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