At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
In our contemporary world, some nations have witnessing growing numbers of the youth population in comparison to the elders. However, some essayists highlight the disadvantages of such transformation, I strongly believe that having extra younger citizens carries fruitful impacts on the societies far more than the side effects.
Firstly, the states – which have significant numbers of young age groups- have a great potential to evolve and develop. This because, younger people always think outside the box and providing the communities with unusual solutions for their chronic issues. For instance, most of the technologies’ breakthroughs in the past few decades based on ideas and efforts of the youth. For example, Mr Bell Gates – the founder of Microsoft corporate – was less than 25 years old when he came up with his first model of WINDOWS operation system.
As regards economical developing, the labour market will not suffer lack of capable manpower. Thus, the governments as well as private investors can enrich the industrial and agricultural sectors progressively with new high density projects. Additionally, “the ability to learn new methods is apparently higher in younger ages” quoted from some studies. That readiness for adapting recent devices leads to flourish the business and enhance the quality of the products, which in turn inclines the national income.
This is not to say that having lesser percentages of older individuals is purely beneficial. In the same context, the disadvantages of such situation are represented in spread of unemployment and outbreaks of crimes which need a fastidious attention by the governors and society leaders to overcome and hinder such socio-economical unrests.
Eventually, being a country full of youth is great bless as long as the rules have the vision and the ability to communicate with these age groups and direct this ultimate source of creativity towards the good and the welfare of their communities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, firstly, however, if, so, thus, well, as regards, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48387096774 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04216124774 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654838709677 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3774257887 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.769230769 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137484582665 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426619783291 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357962782021 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696152858659 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026795747151 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.58 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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