1. Medical technology has increased average life expectancy. Is it curse or blessing?
The discussion on Medical technology is debatable and each side has their own plausible argument. As the result of it, average life expectancy of increased. It is undoubtedly that medical technology breeds some undesirable consequence, but I believe it has more positive effects to society than negative.
On one-hand critics may point out that many countries have challenging with increased in population. Since people can live longer than before, many countries have higher rate of population that they have never faced before. Besides that, they have to increasing their national budget in healthcare section in order to answer the need of hospital, to provide care for elder citizens. Medical technology increases number of population and gives a burden to government expenditure.
However, in spite of argument above, medical technology give people another chance to live longer. In the past, many sick people were dead young and left their family without anyone to care and give the quality of parenting advice their children deserve. Therefore, it will help parents to live longer and taking care of their children and they can become a good citizen in the future.
Lastly, in my opinion, everyone deserves to an advance in medical treatment and live their life as long as they can.
To conclude, medical technology might creates a overpopulation issues in the future, but without it; many people are die young and many children will live without meaningful family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 47, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, lastly, may, so, therefore, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30084745763 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70051584654 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597457627119 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0364907674 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193951285939 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843037427979 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663100171573 0.071462118173 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113237440021 0.151781067708 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621753180167 0.0609392437508 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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