Essay topics: A competitive environment in school and university would bring excellence and need to be encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree？
The world is relying on the next generation of people who are bring and can thrive for new ideas to society. Therefore, many schools and universities have created a competitive atmosphere at classroom to bring motivation and challenge. I firmly agree with the above idea. I feel this way for 2 main reasons, which I will explore in the follow essay.
In a competitive environment will raise students’ awareness about job perspective. This awareness about job perspective is also competitive as in class, so they have to make a strong commitment for their academic life. For instance, many outstanding students in most universities are generally hired after graduated. Competitive environment raise awareness about job perspective for their future.
This environment motivates students to put extra hard working in class. Hard working for school assignments or exam can be seen when all students compete to be at their best. For instance, further research has to be done to get extra credit or higher grade. In competitive academic environment, students tend to put on their extra effort to be better than their peers.
In conclusion, competitive environment will sculpt student to be at their best self and motivated. It has now been shown that it will raise students’ awareness for job perspective and motivated to work harder.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...elying on the next generation of people who are bring and can thrive for new ideas to s...
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Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
...n the next generation of people who are bring and can thrive for new ideas to society...
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Line 1, column 333, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...2 main reasons, which I will explore in the follow essay. In a competitive environment ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 215.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27906976744 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08194905073 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572093023256 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4969802387 50.4703680194 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.0714285714 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3571428571 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150667982917 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061329595969 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383309675018 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975338290945 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258086799156 0.0609392437508 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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