Nowadays many business meeting and trainings are happening online and not in real offices. Do you think advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantageous in this matter?
It is indeed true that technology has become a part and parcel of life. Presently, in modern time , most ofcompanies are using of social networking sites for business meeting and training compared to face to face communication in offices. Here, i will also discuss pros and cons in this essay.
There are manifold points to endorse my point and view .First and formost,masees will attend business meeting and trainings via browsing networking sites then they can save time. To elaborate, nowadays everybody have hectic life. Therefore,nobody has time to going for metting and trainings. Thus,they can save their time with the help of video conferencing . Apart from this,saving money is a best way of e-metting. To demonstrate, whenever employes go for metting and trainings then they have to spend massive amount on hotel ,Food and so on. Therefore , they can save money via online services.
Next, using browsing sites can reduce contamination. To justify, majority of people Use of own vehicle for meeting and training . As a result , it puts adverse implication on ecological. That's why ,they can dropped pollution via online meeting.
Further emphasizing to my point and view, employees will use of video conferencing then they cannot share felling and emotion with emplyees. Besides it, it puts adveree impact on their health.To justify, they use of browsing n etworking sites.Thus,they have to face many difficulty about obesity,eye optics and so on.
To recaptulate ,undeniably; online services is quite essential for us. However there are some drawbacks present of these services.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, apart from, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35317460317 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97621369551 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615079365079 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5877934713 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9444444444 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123034299781 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362179940265 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345815110177 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0664167845125 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362635475473 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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