Everyone should stay at school until 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that studying is a basic right of all people. Except some reasons, I believe that all youngsters should go to school until 18.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why young people do not complete their high school education. The first reason is that their family backgrounds do not allow them to continue to be a student. For instance, children in rural areas where the living conditions are very poor do not even have enough food to eat let alone afford to pay for books, course fees… Furthermore, people who do not want to pursue higher education needn’t wait till they are 18 years old to leave school. In stead of that, they can take part in vocational courses to acquire experience and skills to seek a job as soon as possible.
On the other hand, it seems to me that young people should stay on at school until 18. Firstly, graduating from high school and going to school, student can achieve many qualifications, which is what most employers expect these days. As a result, they have big opportunities to get well-paid jobs or even change their life dramatically. Secondly, before 18 years old, youngsters are not mature enough to face with social evils like drug, alcohol, crime. Their teachers are responsible for arming them not only knowledge but also awareness of law to recognize what they should or should not do.
In conclusion, unless some special conditions, I strongly agree that young people had better to stay at school up to the age of 18.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 489, Rule ID: IN_STEAD_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Instead of'?
Suggestion: Instead of
... they are 18 years old to leave school. In stead of that, they can take part in vocational ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70498084291 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55312745461 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63601532567 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3862547277 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9166666667 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292158184728 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102755714622 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954323236841 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179236312511 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574803675437 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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