Big is salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?
Money is a very important material thing that people need to sustain life on earth. Water, food, clothing and shelter - all of these come with a price. Nothing is free and this is the reason why we need to work jobs. However, is it necessary to have a lot of money, or is job satisfaction more important? In my opinion, being satisfied with a job weighs more importance than having a big salary.
Earning a huge amount is not a bad thing. In fact, this is one of the first things people look for when searching for a job. It has its benefits and an example is being able to live up with the increasing cost of living. Paying bills, purchasing food and shelter and paying for medical expenses are some of the needs that can be fulfilled when one has the means to provide. Another beneficial factor that a big salary can bring is the ability to buy what one wants. Earning a lot can mean one can get the things which are not necessities such as latest electronic devices or a high end car. One can even spend for trips to different places. In other words, there is availability of extra money for things other than the needs.
However, besides the positivities that earning a big amount of salary can bring, it also has its downside. One of these is that it comes with bigger responsibilities. Of course, a big salaried person's work could be more difficult than that of the lesser waged employee. Second, earning a lot does not mean that one is happy in his workplace. He could have the worst boss or be with ungrateful coworkers. Third, there is a big amount of year-end tax to be paid after one has earned a lot; which seems to be unfair for the person.
Job satisfaction on the other hand is more favourable to me than having a huge earning. Being satisfied on a job is something that is more meaningful than the superficial earnings. For me, enjoying the work I do, the environment and the people that surround me at a workplace can never be replaced by anything else. Other than these, great opportunities for growth and development which is present, contributes to the satisfaction of the job. Though there is not a big amount of money paid, one still earns for a living and this is enough for daily needs.
Nowadays, people are becoming more practical in making different purchases. There is no need indulging one's self into temporary material things that money can buy. Inner aspects of being humane are more important than physical ones. Emotional stability, social life, growth and development of one's self can make every day a life being liven, not by money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, look, second, so, still, third, in fact, of course, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 13.1623246493 266% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2121.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 462.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59090909091 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57714181634 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491341991342 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 664.2 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4850747341 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.75 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.32142857143 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18222954454 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597850690969 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728569461654 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121142746506 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541251729593 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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