Some people believe school children should be given multiple short vacations, while others believe they should get one long vacation. Give the advantages of both and express your own point of view.
There are two different attitudes to the length of school vacations. some believe that children ought to be given several short vacations. meanwhile, others think that it should be just once yearly. This essay will discuss positive points of both.
On the one hand, those who support the view of a long-time school vacation believe that if the education system considers a long vacation yearly, this will have a number of benefits for children and their families, ranging from removing extreme tiredness arising from intensive academic curriculums to helping them grow their abilities in other aspects. For example, all children need to spend some time with their families for travelling and sightseeing which both could have educational advantages for children in somewise and gain more experience. If they were given some short-time vacations, they would not have enough time for being with their households. In addition, this is obviously important to allow students to spend moments for learning some activities which are related to their interests such as painting, playing instruments, and singing. If they do not have enough free-time, they could not be really professional in these fields.
By contrast, proponents of multiple short vacations indicate that a school year with a number of relaxing time gives pupils the opportunity to be more energetic. This means that, in this situation, students would be capable of doing their assignments better than when they go to school non-stop. It is clear that they need to have enough refreshing time frequently. Furthermore, this can be useful for school staff. The principle of school would be able to address education issues periodically. Subsequently, it would be possible for them to provide practical solutions in order to improve the quality of education. For instance, if a short free-time is considered at the end of each season, addressing school-related problems will be easier as well.
Overall, it would appear that students should be given several short vacations instead of taking a long vacation as they could easily deal with their school tasks.
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Suggestion: Some
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Suggestion: Meanwhile
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, really, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3115727003 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77356496416 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554896142433 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.1705226892 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.294117647 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283605707879 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100822945864 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722211415124 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205005392472 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773981889038 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.