To understand the most important characteristics of a society one must study its major cities
Migration of people from villages in search of livelihood opportunities that lead to a large-scale settlement give rise to urban areas.
The day of a ordinary citizen today, begins early in the morning to run a race that never gets them anywhere. It is a race for transient things like money, power and fame.
In contrast, people in villages, though from low income jobs like agriculture, seem to know their destination.
My cousins living in the countryside followed the saying "early to bed early to rise" to the to the T, maybe because of irregular electricity supply. But being lazy bum I would never arise early and preferred to be the Midnight owl. It took a toll on my health.
I often see many children in the nearby villages following beginning a early day. Even if given an option of luxury, they refuse. But my urbane friends are not ready to eat on a banana leaf leaf or shun the dining table. It is only through the doctor that embrace their roots.
Mulling over this experience I feel that one should go rural to experience a society; but don't people visit foreign cities and claim to have seen the entire country? I feel it is a disgrace.
I think that people cannot get forget traditions very easily as maybe they are a genetic heritage. Thus many instances like wishing for a male child, littering etc cannot be wiped out simply by better facilities and education.
To conclude, I would say that cities give us diploma in the societal structure, but country sides offer a degree!!
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ive rise to urban areas. The day of a ordinary citizen today, begins early i...
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Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve rise to urban areas. The day of a ordinary citizen today, begins early in ...
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Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'to the'.
Suggestion: to the
... 'early to bed early to rise' to the to the T, maybe because of irregular electrici...
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Line 9, column 70, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...the nearby villages following beginning a early day. Even if given an option of ...
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Line 9, column 187, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: leaf
...riends are not ready to eat on a banana leaf leaf or shun the dining table. It is only th...
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Line 11, column 91, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...d go rural to experience a society; but dont people visit foreign cities and claim t...
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Line 13, column 100, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...y as maybe they are a genetic heritage. Thus many instances like wishing for a male ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...acilities and education. To conclude, I would say that cities give us diploma ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, thus, i feel, i think, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 2235.4752809 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 265.0 442.535393258 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76981132075 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6214711655 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645283018868 0.4932671777 131% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3755192566 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0291273000541 0.243740707755 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00702277633216 0.0831039109588 8% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0190601437494 0.0758088955206 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0133627544816 0.150359130593 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236061386037 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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