Some people say that government should brake down all the historical building and replace them with modren buildings. Do you agree or disagree.
Few masses think that authorities should destroy the all old building and convert into modern style building. However, in my point historical buildings remain same because it helps us to attach with culture.
To remark with there are manifold point to shore up my views.First and foremost, the availability of historical buildings is worthwhile for country because these buildings represent the culture in front of the other country people and provide them a lot of information them related to history and culture.Also, The presence of such building contribute to enhance the economy and save the culture. This is because when that building on the land them tourist excited to see that building and purchase many books and they spend their money on other things. Namely, accommodation food soon with the help of these things economy automatic will be boosted.
On the other hand, in the modern era, everyone want to enjoy aristocratic lifestyle. So some want that old buildings convert into modren building because of there would be luxury facilities in the modern building and this type building cover less space then historical buildings so rest space beneficial for poor people because they can survive their life on that place. Moreover, in the old buildings crime occur because criminal do crime and live in old buildings and before crime they make plane in that buildings so it is not good for local people. If new buildings take place to old buildings . Then there are many security system and other facilities which is help to protect the individual.
To sum up, both view have their own importance. Therefore, in my point of view, historical buildings should not demolished and spend some money because that is only way to save culture and provide information to next generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09152542373 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63016683404 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522033898305 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 98.435257911 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.166666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214190433106 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771438424701 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536245444038 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134993267556 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246600588096 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.