Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people say trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns. While others believe housing facilities should be built instead. Do you agree or disagree?
There is an undeniable fact that trees are important for maintaining life. Supporters say that empty areas of metropolises and towns should be for trees while critics deny that accommodations should be constructed instead. Though each side has their own arguments, I hold more appeal to the former topic.
There are two key ideas persuading why planting trees is important. Plants help to build up the variety of creatures in this biodiversity. These animals are tectonic to human life as we are living with nature. Forests and jungles also hold a big role throughout the ecosystem. They protect farmlands and villagers from floods and supply us with wood and other types of items. A next argumentative point is that trees absorb exhaust fumes and reflect sunlight so as to cool down the Earth. This is to say that, photosynthesis will occur during daytime, producing oxygen for us to breath and taking up carbon dioxide. Plants are also known as 'The green lung' as they filter the air and improve the quality of our life.
Housing is a very needed as the world population is ever-increasing. Building shelters mean that more people are born, more jobs are created and the mixed culture is more unique. The living rate is also reduced when flats are built more. Moreover, skyscrapers can be tourist attractions and therefore, bloom up the economic status. Although those aforementioned reasons are good, their consequences cannot overshadow the merits of planting trees.
Henceforth, plants are the need of our globe. Planting more trees to upgrade the quality of life and thus, make our plant a better one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 460, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02985074627 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74265661229 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638059701493 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6382719319 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.8888888889 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8888888889 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283804148634 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722270894216 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082332261183 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16607499107 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08215156558 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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