Parents should be held legally responsible for children’s acts. What is your opinion?
Children are the future of the world. It is a well known factor that, children have to guide properly as they are not capable of handling things alone. Some people argue that parents are responsible for children's actions while others say no. I also agree with this statement in to some extent and this essay will elaborate my opinions on above statement.
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To begin with, first we have to understand the reason for calling them children. We consider children as people who are under 14 years and most importantly who are not capable of taking independent decisions. They have to be taught good and bad and also how to separate evil from good. Hence, parents are highly responsible of shaping their kids. They have to teach the important factors regarding the society, qualities, relationships etc. to their children. Furthermore, children cannot take decisions by themselves. So that parents are responsible to take decisions on behalf of their kids.
In addition to that, most children are learning by looking at their parents. At early ages, kids are very much interested in doing experiments. As they cannot identify what to and not, they may try everything they like. So that, if children engaged in anti social activities the main blame goes to their parents. Because parents have to look after their children and at the end they are the elders who have to answer and present in laws. Furthermore, in the modernized world there are various methods that pull children in to negative paths. Especially with all these new technologies may affect them badly.
To conclude, based on the above mentioned factors i strongly believe that parents are legally responsible for children's actions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, regarding, so, well, while, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05338078292 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6430312911 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576512455516 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6551724138 158% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5892899527 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.0 104.977214359 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.05 20.9669160288 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220839277275 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708591142569 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060498456226 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158144160652 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554102988649 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 69.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 62.5 Out of 90
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