We have entered a throw-away society and fill the environment with rubbish. What are the causes and what are your solutions?
In the modernized world the place for the environment is getting reduced day by day. People are becoming more selfish that throw-away all used things to the environment making the environment ugly. Here I'm going to discuss causes and solutions on above matter.
To begin with, few decades ago people treated the environment in a sacred manner. They believed that, the humans survived because of the Mother Nature and they knew that if Mother Nature gets angry the results will be catastrophic. Hence, they always give the correct place to the environment. In contrast, people are now only thinking about themselves. They only wanted the well being of them, which simply means they cared about humans. Because of these human activities now people are suffering from various issues. Firstly, the global temperature is getting increased as a result of industrialization. All most all the industries released their flue gases just to the atmosphere without any treatment. Similarly, the other main issue is water pollution. Most of the inland water bodies are now polluted because of the human activities. People just dump their garbage to the rivers and streams. So it is now really hard to find clean water to drink.
Furthermore, deforestation is another issue. People cut trees in a limitless manner for various purposes like woods for houses, furniture etc. But they never think that, they are living because of trees. Plants provide us oxygen without taking anything in return. Hence, people have to rethink about this case. They have to use resources in a sustainable way. They have to utilize resources by thinking about the future generation as well. Governments need to take necessary actions to control environment pollution. Rules and regulations must implement and also they have to inform general public about the importance of protecting environment.
To conclude based on the above mentioned factors I think that it clear we have to rethink about our behaviors.
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| 2019-09-13 | yasamin.gharib62 | 77 | view |
| 2018-06-14 | sanduni jayasekara | 77 | view |
| 2018-04-29 | bashirheidari | 11 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, really, similarly, so, well, i think, in contrast, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1207.87684729 138% => OK
No of words: 320.0 242.827586207 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.203125 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72653160799 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 139.433497537 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596875 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 379.143842365 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 12.6551724138 198% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.5024630542 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1529042364 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.6 104.977214359 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8 20.9669160288 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.12 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 2.91625615764 411% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0981058113221 0.242375264174 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0265398653856 0.0925447433944 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387977077458 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786838716914 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053978902043 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 12.6369458128 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.99 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.3980295567 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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