The tendency of human being to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?
Since inception human beings have a tendency to copy other people that may be clothes or other consumer goods like mobile phones. This trend is evident in the fashion industry and consumer items. Personally, I am in fully accord with this notion.
It has been seen that people are more conscious about their look and this nature has been substantiated by a research whose outcomes stated that if a person is well dressed his confidence increases and vice versa. The vogue is mostly popularized by the famous personalities and celebrities because of large fan following they have. So, whenever a celebrity wear a new outfit the mass follows and make it a fashion. Hence, this obsession of people make rise to popularity of fashion.
Apart from fashion, people tend to buy consumer good that highly prevalent. Nowadays, every second day a new product is launched with advanced features than its predecessor. This lust of people to be up to date, entice to them to buy that thing irrespective of knowing its utility to them. Mostly these items are bought under influence of others, as now is age of internet there are certain websites that provides reviews on different products. So, whenever a person has to buy such entity they go to websites and check the reviews given by people, if the product has good reviews they will end up in buying it.
To conclude, i think to imitate is propensity of human beings and is inevitable. Hence, this nature will set to be continued.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ll end up in buying it. To conclude, i think to imitate is propensity of human...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, may, second, so, well, apart from, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84251968504 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6019780054 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610236220472 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6718898923 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8571428571 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149812254612 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549008907565 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612940197818 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103626972106 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678566687677 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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