visual pollution is major cause of accidents. do you agree or disagee ?
"Pollution - if you will not kill it, it will kill you". visual pollution is an aesthetic issue and refers to the impacts of pollution that impair one's ability to relish a vista or view.
there are many issues which remain irrevocable , for instance the given topic asserts that is visual pollution a main cause of accidents nowadays ? I strongly agree with the given statement and shall explore this aspect in various paragraphs.
to commence with, I would say that pollution or visual pollution has become a leading cause of accidents nowadays. The factors which contribute to accidents include Buildings. The streets are covered by high buildings which are very lucrative and attractive to eyes. The buildings act as a powerful distractor to the people passing by. The buildings which are made of glass has become the root cause of accidents. the lights from the vehicles get reflected on glass and when it gets reflected back it builds a reason for accidents.i would like to bolster my perspective by revealing the survey conducted by Delhi University in march 2018 which stated that 8 out of 10 accidents occur every year due to high buildings.
There are plethora of more causes of accidents such as overcrowding which further results in over pollution . Amritsar city has become the second most polluted city of punjab. The smoke from high number of vehicles which not only harms the clean air but also becomes a disaster for many lives. The smoke from large number of vehicles which result from overcrowding; which creates a lot of mess on roads is a strong cause of accidents taking place these days . to illustrate this, I would say that The Tribune has published the article on june5, 2018 which stated that nearly 500 accidents are taking place in punjab state just because of the over traffic and over crowd on roads.
As we have seen, that there are a number of reasons of major accidents which is undoubtedly, the pollution. So, it is a high time for the government to take steps against pollution in which certain laws should be implemented in order to have a control on pollution and we should all become a part to this solution and not of the pollution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85828877005 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.636101792 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534759358289 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3430843743 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.882352941 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82352941176 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20351645079 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700399528458 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656684080316 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121144695401 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049276780265 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.