Polygamy has led to massive divorce rate around the globe. give possible reasons and solutions.
It is undoubtedly the case of polygamy which is also affecting the society adversely.In this essay, i will examine the possible reasons for this trend and suggest some of the practical policies that aurorities could implement to curb the problem of polygamy.
The first step is to understand why the divorce rate is increasing due to the practice of polygamy? Broadly speaking, there are two main reasons for this. The first and foremost is the misunderstandings built up in between the couple which creates conflicts and problems between two people and they both get separated which further results in the divorce. There is almost certainly one solution to this problem which includes the initiative that must be taken by the government. The government should impose penalty fines, imprisonment on
who so ever
will be found guilty.
One more cause could be the marriages done under parentral pressure. These kind of marriages are not successful and people from the couple get separated to get married to their beloved. However, one option has to be improved which involves the couple counselling. The couple needs to get counselled and the should be given
the solutions to disputes among them. The best epitome of this is the fine of Rs 50,000 is imposed on the person who is found to practice polygamy.
In conclusion, there are a variety of different factors that have led to make this problem worse. while it may not be possible to find a complete solution to this. This could probably be solved by the government initiative where not following polygamy would be a mandatory rule all around the globe.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0037037037 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71342999393 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.145977251 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113670268511 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390955155209 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527394808871 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0502445724907 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524767130831 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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