Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it?
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about either laws change human behavior or not. While some progressively adore the ideology that law change human behavior, others undoubtedly despise it. This essay will prudently persuade the effect of law on human behavior and will conclude that human behaviors are influenced by law.
There are several effects which can be seen if rules and regulations are strict in a society. Reason of this is people know that they will be heavily penalized if they don't follow rules. For example, as per latest reports of Dubai police, previous year road accidents were decreased by 50% when heavy fine was announced for violating traffic rules. So one can argue that if strict laws are made and implemented in a society, people follow them which change their behavior.
Those who believe that law does not affect human behavior argue that it is the sense of ownership and responsibility which effects human behavior. These people are unaware of the fact that there are very less numbers of people who take responsibility to be positive in absence of laws. When I was a university student, I made a survey that how many students would not cheat in examination hall if there is no examiner to control examination. Results revealed were very shocking that only less than 10% students will not cheat in this situation. So we can say that rules and regulation cause a prominent effect on human behavior.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, it is cleared that human behavior is influenced by laws. In conclusion, I strongly agree that human behavior is changed by laws.
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...that human behavior is changed by laws.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.5418719212 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 5.94088669951 320% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90287769784 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56189111045 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553956834532 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6903062736 50.4703680194 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.3571428571 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 7.25397266985 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35355439427 0.242375264174 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130396283287 0.0925447433944 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111635732999 0.071462118173 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219284377287 0.151781067708 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105255758771 0.0609392437508 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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