A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor.
The topic raises a controversial issue of whether a person should retain any civil rights or not after purposely commiting a crime. Indisputably, everyone should get a chance for correcting themselves after commiting a crime. Nevertheless, if a person will be supported of just warned after commiting a horrible crime then the society and people will be negatively impacted from it. Thus, I generally agree with the openion that the crime should be punished in a way that people should not every try to think of doing it.
First of all, day by day, crime is enhancing in various forms. There are multiple news channels and newspapers giving information about the crime scenes throughout the day. Some of these crimes are minor while some are very crucial which had caused even death or murder of a person for rapes or greed for money or jealousy of success etc. Thus, these crime should be given a hard punishment in order to spread the safety amongst people so that people can wander fearlessly on their roads.
Furthermore, If the crime is minor like some pety theft which could be done intentionally, then that should also be punished in order to disseminate the awareness about the crime. Additionally, the rights of that person who had commited the crime should be revoked for some time as well in order to create a crimeless society. A crime is a crime whether it is small or big and should be punished.
Additionally, many people had unintentionally commiting a crime which they don't even know. They are not aware about the thing that person is doing is a crime. Like for instance, many people are exporting drugs and other dangerous substances with the help of their friends in a parcel which the innocent friend do not aware of. If the rules of the country are strict, and people are aware about such crimes then the possibility of such crimes can be declined.
Finally, if an employee of a company commits a crime whether in the form of any physical threats like sexual harasment or any technical threat like intentionally harming a system which contains a lot of information of a company, they should be punished so that other people can become aware about the crime and cannot think of doing it.
In conclusion, although the crime can be minor or major and had done intentionally or unintentionally, they should be punished in order to make people aware about the crimes and make the world a beautiful and peaceful place to live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this crime' or 'these crimes'?
Suggestion: this crime; these crimes
...money or jealousy of success etc. Thus, these crime should be given a hard punishment in or...
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Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...entionally commiting a crime which they dont even know. They are not aware about the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79481132075 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6881981943 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455188679245 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.9 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2253479926 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.588235294 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9411764706 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 5.21951772744 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218356100751 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940270021883 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765611162683 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127408162166 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700103149011 0.0667264976115 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.