"The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
The statement presented by author states that the qualities that should be provided to the young people are cooperation not competition. The society is full of young people who are the bright and upcoming future of our society and to make our upcoming life better thare are some values and essense of morals that should be given to them. These morals contains several things such as honesty, loyalty, faithfulness, teamspirit etc but here here we are considering the two major qualities competition and coordination, which play vital role. Here, by analysing the statement carefully I would like to say that both the competition and cooperation both have equal importance in anyone's nurchuring.
Beginning with the role of coordination, as there are various fields in which we are progressing day by day. In the field of scientific research cooperation plays vital roles. Researchers use one another's theory or they consider experiment that was performed by another researcher to quest more about that topic. Thus they cooperate each other. Instead if they start comparing and competiting about to prove one's theory right then the science may not developed like the way it is now. Considering the field of space technology, NASA, there are various scientists working to analyze the planets and their motion etc around us. They need to rely on other scientist's work. They work in team and cooperate each other. Not just NASA there are other such organizations such as Russian, Ameraican reserach centre which have teams working for the same work and they connect with various teams wordwide.
Moving ahead, the field of sports is famous. We play several sports in our life. There are the games in which we need to play in a team such as football, Cricket etc. Football team consits of several players and they need bro cooperate to win the match, match can not be won by any one member's efforts. This fundamental is applicable in all other games as well. Thus, team ordination leads to the victory and it is not only one but its should be supported by following rules and sportsmanship etc.
Any individual's idea can be only accomplished by the support of team members. For example, Bill Gates had an idea to make a company and he had a vision to make it possible but it is not easy task that can be done by on his own. He gathered people who can help him to make this idea turn into reality. Today he is one of the richest man in world. His dillegence and support of the team members led him to this stage.
As we know there are two well known companies samsung and apple. These companies are both competitive for one other and they cooperate well too. Apple is biggest customer of Samsung. Competion also plays a good role in anyone's lofe. Like students have competion among them to secure first rank. They also cooperate if they have doubts and solev with one another.
In sum, I don't want to say that competition is not essential for the growth of young people in any field but cooperation has a bit more significance than competion. By providing both of this qualities along with some ethics and morals to young people of society we can prepare them to progress in any field weather it is government, industry or any other field.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The proper name in singular (thare) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
... to make our upcoming life better thare are some values and essense of morals that ...
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Message: You should probably use 'contain'.
Suggestion: contain
...t should be given to them. These morals contains several things such as honesty, loyalty...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: here
...yalty, faithfulness, teamspirit etc but here here we are considering the two major qualit...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'qualities'' or 'quality's'?
Suggestion: qualities'; quality's
...e here we are considering the two major qualities competition and coordination, which pla...
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Suggestion:
...use one anothers theory or they consider experiment that was performed by another...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...earcher to quest more about that topic. Thus they cooperate each other. Instead if t...
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... topic. Thus they cooperate each other. Instead if they start comparing and competiting...
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...omparing and competiting about to prove ones theory right then the science may not ...
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...prove ones theory right then the science may not developed like the way it is now...
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Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
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... win the match, match can not be won by any one members efforts. This fundamental is ap...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
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...ing rules and sportsmanship etc. Any individuals idea can be only accomplished by the su...
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Suggestion: is the biggest
...ther and they cooperate well too. Apple is biggest customer of Samsung. Competion also pla...
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...ce than competion. By providing both of this qualities along with some ethics and mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, thus, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2693.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 562.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79181494662 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86893614481 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59022728052 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476868327402 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 843.3 704.065955056 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.5318155253 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.15625 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15625 5.21951772744 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146613520252 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036078283272 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045424420324 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835909577195 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678311342065 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.