You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter,
explain your situation
describe your problems
tell him/her when you think you can move in
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you to inform you that I was suppose to move to the another flat near Book Way Street. However, I apologise that I would not be able to move over there next month due to some personal perspectives. I had decided to shift to the new apartment after my trimester completion but unfortunately board has postponed the exam dates due to heavy snow.
Moreover, I would hardly get any leisure time to pack-off my stuff due to coming up tests and unfavorable weather. Additionally, my mother is coming over here for few weeks. Thus, I would be super busy for next few months.
Furthermore, after exams we have to appear for vivas for two courses. Thus, the entire process will get delayed. I hope you can understand my point of view as well. I will try my best to move to the other flat quickly. To add more, I am estimating that I would be able to move to the new place after four months. I hope this sounds good to you.
Waiting for your favorable response,
Yours faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...writing to you to inform you that I was suppose to move to the another flat near Book W...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48924731183 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54514675348 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623655913978 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.807495405 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.2307692308 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3076923077 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262359836497 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862720088043 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692417651873 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140244439914 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858890514356 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.17 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.