We recommend that Monarch Books open a café in its store. Monarch, having been in business at the same location for more than twenty years, has a large customer base because it is known for its wide selection of books on all subjects. Clearly, opening the café would attract more customers. Space could be made for the café by discontinuing the children's book section, which will probably become less popular given that the most recent national census indicated a significant decline in the percentage of the population under age ten. Opening a café will allow Monarch to attract more customers and better compete with Regal Books, which recently opened its own café
As mentioned in the argument the Board of Directors of Monarch Books recommend that Monarch Books needs to open a café in its store, so that it can attract more coustomer. My attracting more coustomers Monarch Books wanted to compete with Regal Books which recentely opened its own café.
In order to attract the coustomers to the Books stores there are various ways not only opening a café in the store instead offering some dicount on high rated books, selling the best books, treating the coustomer very well etc these methods will increase the coustomers surely. The Board of Directors of Monarch Books should consider all of these possibility to increase the coustomers.
As mentioned in the argument, by opening the café would defenitely attract the coustomers but they are unsure whether the customer who vistis the café will buy the books. Some coustomers are not interested in the books so they will spend their time in café. Which is a loss for Monarch Books.
In order to establish a better competation with Regal Books, opening the café is not only the good idea instead Board of Directors need to understand what is the reason behind the increase in the coustomers for the Regal Books, it might be because of the area in which it is located or because of its quality of book. All this things need to be considered in aorder to attract the more coustomeres.
Finally, opening the café in the Monarch Books might attract more coustomers but in order to compete with the Regal Books, the Board of Directors need to understnd the reason behind the increase in the number of coustomers.
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- Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study. 33
- The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models. 33
- Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed 50
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: As mentioned in the argument the Board of Directors of Monarch Books recommend that Monarch Books needs to open a caf? in its store, so that it can attract more coustomer.
Error: coustomer Suggestion: customer
Sentence: My attracting more coustomers Monarch Books wanted to compete with Regal Books which recentely opened its own caf?.
Error: coustomers Suggestion: customers
Error: recentely Suggestion: recently
Sentence: In order to attract the coustomers to the Books stores there are various ways not only opening a caf? in the store instead offering some dicount on high rated books, selling the best books, treating the coustomer very well etc these methods will increase the coustomers surely.
Error: dicount Suggestion: discount
Error: coustomers Suggestion: customers
Error: coustomer Suggestion: customer
Sentence: The Board of Directors of Monarch Books should consider all of these possibility to increase the coustomers.
Error: coustomers Suggestion: customers
Sentence: As mentioned in the argument, by opening the caf? would defenitely attract the coustomers but they are unsure whether the customer who vistis the caf? will buy the books.
Error: coustomers Suggestion: customers
Error: defenitely Suggestion: definitely
Error: vistis Suggestion: visits
Sentence: Some coustomers are not interested in the books so they will spend their time in caf?.
Error: coustomers Suggestion: customers
Sentence: In order to establish a better competation with Regal Books, opening the caf? is not only the good idea instead Board of Directors need to understand what is the reason behind the increase in the coustomers for the Regal Books, it might be because of the area in which it is located or because of its quality of book.
Error: coustomers Suggestion: customers
Error: competation Suggestion: competition
Sentence: All this things need to be considered in aorder to attract the more coustomeres.
Error: coustomeres Suggestion: customers
Error: aorder Suggestion: order
Sentence: Finally, opening the caf? in the Monarch Books might attract more coustomers but in order to compete with the Regal Books, the Board of Directors need to understnd the reason behind the increase in the number of coustomers.
Error: coustomers Suggestion: customers
Error: understnd Suggestion: understand
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argument 1 -- not OK
argument 2 -- not exactly
argument 3 -- OK
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.0 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 276 350
No. of Characters: 1297 1500
No. of Different Words: 117 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.076 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.699 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.436 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 83 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 68 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 15.596 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.506 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.506 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.156 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 341, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this possibility' or 'these possibilities'?
Suggestion: this possibility; these possibilities
...of Monarch Books should consider all of these possibility to increase the coustomers. As mention...
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Line 4, column 322, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... or because of its quality of book. All this things need to be considered in aorder ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.6327345309 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 55.5748502994 85% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 16.3942115768 18% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 2260.96107784 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 276.0 441.139720559 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82971014493 5.12650576532 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.56307096286 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49000048081 2.78398813304 89% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 204.123752495 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.427536231884 0.468620217663 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 705.55239521 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 19.7664670659 51% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.8935555723 57.8364921388 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.3 119.503703932 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 23.324526521 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.70786347227 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296040599831 0.218282227539 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151584596468 0.0743258471296 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08532978745 0.0701772020484 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195235347625 0.128457276422 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861005363376 0.0628817314937 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.3799401198 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.3550499002 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.197005988 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.5979740519 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.32208582834 90% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 98.500998004 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 12.3882235529 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.