The bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005.
The given bar chart illustrates how many students in both genders studying
at unniversity chose eight different kinds of subjects in 2005.
As can be seen that the quantity of male students learning Sciences and
Mathematics were the highest. Meanwhile Social Sciences and Languages were
two courses which were the most prefered by females.
In details, there were jusst under 25,000 girls chose Social Sciences, being
nearly double the number of male students. Besides, the total peak at the highest
nunber compared with the other courses. Next came to Languages, while around
18,000 was the number of girls, only 2,000 for boys. Addtionally, two subjects
were chosen by almost males students were Sciences and Mathematics. The
number were approximately 22,000 and 18,000 for males, 10,000 and nearly 5,000
for females respectively.
Interstingly, Humanities attracted just over 10,000 students and it equally
divided into two genders. There were more girls (9,000) stuying The Arts than
boys (2,500). 15,000 and 11,000 were the number of boys and girls chose
Literature to learn in unniversity respondingly. In Law, the number of female students was nearly half of the male with 10,000
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 31, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...nces and Mathematics were the highest. Meanwhile Social Sciences and Languages were two...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43617021277 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58228109335 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61170212766 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.57606248 43.030603864 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.1666666667 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 16.0 3.83414634146 417% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148048974747 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632398728735 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682401259273 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.054380279092 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535051692768 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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