The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates, the online shopping sale of electronics and appliances, food and beverages, home furnishings and video games in Canada in the years of 2005 and 2010. Units are measured in percentage.
Overall, it has been clear that, video games, food and beverages were the significant sale in the retail sector during 2005. Whereas, the other two has noticeable reduction in online sale marketing in Canada by 2010.
In 2005, electronics and appliance was the highest division of online sale with 35%. Which shows 5% reduction by the year of 2010. While, the lowest sector of internet marketing sale was video games with 18%. Whilst, in 2010 video games makes up 23 % of sale in Canada.
The considerable growth in internet sale was in food and beverages from 2005 to 2010 such as, 22% and 32% respectively.
On the other hand, home furnishing consist of 25% market sale in the starting stage. Which has been rapidly declined to 15 % at the end of the period in Canadian online retail sector.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89534883721 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60179211995 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546511627907 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2771537065 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5454545455 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287240000414 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111248822108 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663529243858 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162876372645 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589509177177 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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