many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment.why is this happening and what measures can be tackle this problem.
As a human, it is our responsibility to abide by the law instituted by the society. There is an unstoppable rising of criminals in these times and most of them are frequent lawbreakers who had a record of serving a particular offense in the past. There is no strict and solid rules and policies in most parts of the world which is the main reason why people are taking it less seriously hence proper professional referrals to the offenders and implementing rigid and strong consequences might resolve this.
There are several possiblities of endless crimes and one of these is a person's perception and attitude towards dealing with mishaps. It is quite expected for a person to commit the same mistake again after another as some people act violently or in an unlawful manner when provoke as it might be the way they were raised and mold. For instance, many juvenile delinquents commonly involve in family issues which affect their approach to handling problems by responding destructively. Moreover, in most cases, several general laws are taken for granted as it gives less importance to people to follow such as traffic light rules, smoking to prohibited places, infidelity to marriage, drug addiction and more relevant misdeed from less to grave.
There are viable solutions that could aid in these crucial matters. One possible way is directing and submitting a felony to a counseling program. It could make a big difference in a positive way if a lawbreaker is referred to the guidance counselor for support and self-awareness. In addition, it is also beneficial for a nation to implement a stern law of zero tolerance to general rules of traffic, drug-related and smoking issues for instance. In this way, people will take major caution to minor policies.
In conclusion, crimes are spiking high as sinners never learned despite the price they paid after committing the first time mistakes. Focusing on changing the person's troubled viewpoint into a proper direction in life and creating a strong constitution may lead to a better and sustainable progress in a country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...program. It could make a big difference in a positive way if a lawbreaker is referred to the guid...
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Suggestion:
... and sustainable progress in a country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05797101449 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88823381324 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611594202899 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0536732753 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.642857143 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6428571429 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13133202468 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357761131155 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040103091092 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697826952651 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243620765236 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.