Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are still required. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people believe that sport activities are the best way to improve public health, while, some other think sport activities alone are not sufficient to be healthy. In the following paragraphs I shall discuss the both views before drawing a conclusion.
To begin with, it is quite unavoidable fact that sport activities keeps us active, fit and improve our body functioning. Firstly, it improves our digestive system, metabolism and helps burning calories. which is essential to reduce obesity, risk of diabetes and other life threatening diseases. Secondly, it improve our blood circulation and directly benefits to decrease risk of cardio vascular diseases such as Stroke, heart attack etc. Thirdly, exercise and sport activities keep our muscle, joins and bone healthy and strong. They help to relief from the chronic pain, stress and of course improve sleeps. Sport activities directly benefits our mental health.
Almost everybody agrees with the fact that increasing sport activities improve our health, however, it is not cure and complete treatment. They work as one of the main contributing factor to reduce the the risk and can help treating disease along with other treatment. In addition to that, there are some other diseases which are caused by environmental pollution, micro-organ and our unhealthy lifestyle. For example HIV aids, Tuberculosis etc. have less to do with increasing sport activities. They need other treatment and medicine as well.
In conclusion, it can be said that sport activities definitely reduce the risk of many root diseases and they are necessary to be healthy. But increasing sport activities alone is not sufficient solution to improve public health. Sport activities along with other treatment is the best way to maintain health society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to burn' or 'burn'.
Suggestion: to burn; burn
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
... metabolism and helps burning calories. which is essential to reduce obesity, risk of...
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Message: Did you mean 'improves'?
Suggestion: improves
...life threatening diseases. Secondly, it improve our blood circulation and directly bene...
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Suggestion:
...tivities keep our muscle, joins and bone healthy and strong. They help to relief ...
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Suggestion: the
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... the main contributing factor to reduce the the risk and can help treating disease alon...
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to treat' or 'treat'.
Suggestion: to treat; treat
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... by environmental pollution, micro-organ and our unhealthy lifestyle. For example...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, of course, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72703771405 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546428571429 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.698471055 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5555555556 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234551772706 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825189358532 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819777222213 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179745864573 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836666712231 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.