You recently moved to a new house and you want to invite an old friend to stay with you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- invite him to stay and suggest a date
- briefly describe the new house and garden
- say why you like your new house
Dear Jimmy,
I hope you find this letter in the pink of your health. It was amazing moments we spent the last time we met at your home, last summer. I'm excited to let you know that I'd recently shifted to a new house, which I was searching for the last couple of months. I heartily invite you to stay at my newly rented house. What are you up to for the coming weekend, on 25 October, come and I'm sure we'll have a wonderful time together.
I can't keep calm to explain about the house, it's so beautiful and comfortable. It's in the city centre of the city where all the transport is easily accessible apart from that, society has a beautiful garden as well. The garden is so beautiful and has lots of amenities, such as exercise zone, children's play area and a jogging track too.
Having such a house to live is really a privilege, particularly in the heart of the city. There are many reasons why I like it so much. Firstly, it is well connected by various modes of transport, for example, but, metro and local trains. Secondly, the garden is a place where I not only spend my free time but also for a morning walk and some light exercise to overcome sedentary lifestyle. Lastly, my parents are really adjusted with the locality and enjoying their good time.
I can't wait to see you and give my regards to your mom and dad.
Yours truly,
Kaplan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... time we met at your home, last summer. Im excited to let you know that Id recentl...
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Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...summer. Im excited to let you know that Id recently shifted to a new house, which ...
^^
Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...coming weekend, on 25 October, come and Im sure well have a wonderful time togethe...
^^
Line 5, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ll have a wonderful time together. I cant keep calm to explain about the house, i...
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Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ouse, its so beautiful and comfortable. Its in the city centre of the city where al...
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Line 9, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...lity and enjoying their good time. I cant wait to see you and give my regards to ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, really, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, for example, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 252.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40476190476 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3349120024 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630952380952 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.313845602 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 4.34317383033 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22870308145 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705698374804 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659372258333 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114770777033 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872581165487 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.